acaldema

dict

Posted: 10 October 2008 12:13 AM

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acaldema---bloody battlefield

Brave the warrior that perished, dead;
Amidst the acaldema bloody,red
Risen to empyrean heights his soul said,
Vain is the ethereal man,his might??(would anyone rhyme it for me?!)

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As thou knowest not what is the way of the spirit nor how the bones do grow in the womb of her that is with child even so thou knowest not the works of God who maketh all
Ecclesiastes 11:5

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Thoughtful

Posted: 10 October 2008 05:31 AM

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dict - 10 October 2008 12:13 AM
acaldema---bloody battlefield

Brave the warrior that perished, dead;
Amidst the acaldema bloody,red
Risen to empyrean heights his soul said,
Vain is the ethereal man,his might??(would anyone rhyme it for me?!)

Upon his wish to die, his right.

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douglang

Posted: 10 October 2008 01:34 PM

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“soul said” is a little difficult to comprehend....

Risen to empyrean heights his soul ascended,
Vain is the ethereal man, his might dismembered.

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dict

Posted: 10 October 2008 11:40 PM

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or better
Risen to empyrean heights,its mighty towers
His soul set free, once imbowered?

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As thou knowest not what is the way of the spirit nor how the bones do grow in the womb of her that is with child even so thou knowest not the works of God who maketh all
Ecclesiastes 11:5

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